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Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Chapter Twenty-six

Let's try using Katherine Hannigan's writing as a model again.  

Please reread the last paragraph on page 201.

Now try remembering sometime you felt frustrated and needing to let loose with your thoughts and feelings.  Try to write a a couple of sentences in the same style without using any of the same similes and metaphors.
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6 comments:

  1. JuliaMarch 22, 2011 at 10:26 AM

    I lied to my best friend and I was so disgusted with myself that I felt like a person pulling hair out of the drain of a bath tub, that had bubble gum in it.

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  2. lillieMarch 22, 2011 at 10:34 AM

    I yelled at my best friend and I felt like I was stuck in quicksand and nobody was by my side to help me get out.

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  3. Jared SMarch 22, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    I punched my best friend and I was so mad that I felt like I was going to never apoligize even when I die.

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  4. TommieMarch 22, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    I screamed at my freind and never spoke to him again and ifeel like i can never change it.

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  5. JustinMarch 22, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    I kneed my friend in the face and nocked 2 of his teeth out i never said sorry I wish i did.It was on my friends bounce house I triped him and he fell into my knee.

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  6. Jared SApril 11, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    testing, testing,1,2,3.

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